peer feedback

I received some feedback from a peer about my narrative experiment, and was surprised but happy to see the way in which they interpreted it. I was especially intrigued by the mention of X-rays, as I had not considered this initially. 

This feedback was especially helpful to me as it not only allowed me to understand the beauty of how many different interpretations can be born of a visual narrative, it also helped me understand that if I had a very specific story I wanted to tell with my work, I had to be more deliberate about it. 

i also got some on my jellyfish lino that ill show in a later post but here is that feedback as wellll